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to critique my own words:for a poem about a punch, and the effect of a punch, this poem lacks punch and tenderness equally.in fact, this comment would make a better poem.
i love everything past clear morning. i think if u edit it this could be really powerfull
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to critique my own words:
for a poem about a punch, and the effect of a punch, this poem lacks punch and tenderness equally.
in fact, this comment would make a better poem.
i love everything past clear morning. i think if u edit it this could be really powerfull
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