your mouth is a cathedral -
i want to pray in you forever!
she looked at him
carefully
from the eiderdown,
and wondered why
the biggest bastards
had
the best lines.
i want to pray in you forever!
she looked at him
carefully
from the eiderdown,
and wondered why
the biggest bastards
had
the best lines.
5 comments:
lover/ bastard/ devil
pan/
hunter
quarry/ fright
end
road leads dark
the penultimate,
smiling;
prayer
i've got you in my feed.
:)
ha ha ha so true. We've all been there sweets. Thanks for your lovely comments - nice to have you back.
Oh to write half as lovely as you! My heart grew quick reading the Scene. So good. I love the way you break your lines and your simplistic yet original images that bring a sense of organic beauty to the poem.
Fuck that sound so pretentious, but I really mean it.
Keep writing
I like it.
What about striking the first and the two alls:
she looked at him
carefully
from the eiderdown,
wondered why
the biggest bastards
had
the best lines.
?
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