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love it!! punchy..great
I don't get this joke, but I like meter and mystery of the punchline.I like the meter exended back to the rhyme, though I don't feel the boy with rickets image.
what is with this one is(i think?)that is lovely!and trueand ironicand sadand stilland againlovely!
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love it!! punchy..great
I don't get this joke, but I like meter and mystery of the punchline.
I like the meter exended back to the rhyme, though I don't feel the boy with rickets image.
what is with this one is
(i think?)
that is lovely!
and true
and ironic
and sad
and still
and again
lovely!
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