poetry, fiction and song... inviting comment and critique
this is great. i really like these short ones, probably more than anything else that i've read by you.you kick ass!it's so fucking late here. I set aside time to write and have only written a Preamble/Author's note/Thank You's for this chapbook thingee.I'm off.
love it!! punchy..great
I don't get this joke, but I like meter and mystery of the punchline.I like the meter exended back to the rhyme, though I don't feel the boy with rickets image.
what is with this one is(i think?)that is lovely!and trueand ironicand sadand stilland againlovely!
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