Friday, May 12, 2006

the joke

all this shite
about love

and what gets left?
one brown shoe

fourteen hundred
years

of indifference.

3 comments:

Suze said...

love it!! punchy..great

Eric said...

I don't get this joke, but I like meter and mystery of the punchline.

I like the meter exended back to the rhyme, though I don't feel the boy with rickets image.

bereweber said...

what is with this one is
(i think?)
that is lovely!
and true
and ironic
and sad
and still
and again
lovely!