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Friday, October 13, 2006
Jehovah
Our world is a weak place of towers and ruin, tears, taste. a sun comes up in an old man's face, happy to hurt when the stars race. turn of grace, these letters returned to the same place, without cataclysm, nor trace.
wow this is such a neat little piece! has great cadence too and the ideas, the words the length the ruins the sun the face and your mixture of words very nice!
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wow
this is such a neat little piece!
has great cadence too
and the ideas, the words
the length
the ruins the sun
the face
and your mixture of words
very nice!
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